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My PonyÕs Adventures

 

By: kyileanna

Age: 8

 

I was walking in the woods when I saw a white tail poking out of the woods.

 

When I came closer to the tail, a beautiful white pony jumped out!

 

Then when I continued the trail, I noticed that the pony had followed me.

 

I tried to get her to stop, but she wouldnÕt so the pony followed me home.

 

My family agreed to take care of the pony! That very night ,my family took the pony to the Crandal's.

 

We decided to name her Linsy. She is always at the barn waiting for me with some treats and a ride

 

She is a very good girl and listens to my commands very quickly.

 

One month later, when I come in with hands full of treats, I donÕt hear her winning in the barn.

 

I wish she was in her paddock.. But she wasnÕt.  My friend Julie and I look all day.

 

At school I tell everyone. Katie said to meet her after school today. She said that her pony, Lily was taking care of Linsy! Nicole said she saw Linsy galloping in the town green.

 

Now I think ÒWhy didnÕt I ask them? They are my classmates and my friends?!Ó

 

That afternoon, I got my pony and fixed the broken gate. I was glad to have Linsy back.